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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag!

Wow, this is super difficult to read. Not in a bad way! This is brilliantly written, and his pain is so raw and brutal that it's almost impossible to not feel what he's feeling.

You can even feel his horror as he relives her death, and his desperation as he takes the ultimate sacrifice. You write this very very well, and for a few minutes while reading this you drop straight into Draco's head xD

If I were to suggest anything, it would be to maybe draw out his reasoning of whether or not to, uh, bump himself off. It seems to happen a tiny bit too quickly to me. That's all :)

Great job!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

I am pleased you found this well-written and could feel what Draco was feeling.

Its great to know that you think I captured his emotions well, and that you could connect with Draco.

I wanted to present it as a spur-of-the-moment decision, but if I ever edit, I'll take your suggestion into account. Thank you!


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