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Review:adluvshp says:
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This was an interesting one-shot. I liked your insight into Umbridge's mind. Her hatred for children, for half-breeds was very evident. The idea of Flitwick being half-goblin was definitely new and interesting. I liked it. I also liked the way Umbridge reflected on the houses. The ending was hilarious with everyone puking (Weasley twins' puking pastilles eh) and Umbridge fuming. I could visualise the scenario in my head.

All in all, this was a good read. The only CC I'd give you is perhaps to add in more description and detail of the scene instead of just focusing on the action/thoughts.

Apart from that, good work.
Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thanks for the read & review!! I actually (Ack...I've said this too many time without actually doing it...) plan on going back in a re-doing and adding to this. The challenge I wrote this for was focused on having only one emotion, so I really tried to leave a lot of the usual stuff out. (If that makes any sense.) LOL!

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