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Review:patronus_charm says:
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I have to say I was a bit wary of reading this, as AU doesn’t appeal to me much, but I really, really enjoyed it. It was so refreshing and different, yet at the same time it reminded me of JK’s original style a lot, so it was like coming home with fresh paint on the door you could say.

I really liked the idea of Ludo and Harry being the judges, it made me laugh, as they’re probably going to be a rather dynamic duo. I also liked the addition of Skeeter, and she was perfectly in character.

I have to say that all of your other characterisations were also spot on, and I think a special mention has to go to how Hermione reacted to Skeeter being present. Wub, I loved it so much, as you just kept them original and I really can’t describe how great and wonderful that was. Then the addition of Myrtle was also brilliantly original, as you never expected her to take part, and it was great to see her there.

A minor note on the layout, it may have been mentioned before, but the text was shifted towards the left, and though it wasn’t off putting it didn’t look in a presentational way. I also have to note in this section ‘From Gryffindor"(At the mention of
Gryffindor, Rita started pointing her quill at Hermione, Ron Weasley,
Neville Longbottom, Ginny Weasley, and the rest of the Gryffindors
before counting everyone else. She furiously took down her first notes
of the games)"to Ravenclaw, and Hufflepuff to Slytherin,’ and some of the others, you dialogue punctuation was a little off. As Hermione’s thoughts weren’t dialogue related you need a full stop after Gryffindor and at the end of her thoughts.

Other than that it was thoroughly enjoyable!

-Kiana

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