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Review:HandofGlory says:
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Wow, this was a dark story for Draco Malfoy.

Avada Kedavra is truly a dark spell, and now Draco finally realizes what it is capable of, physically and emotionally. Although I find it weird that it was Catherine's death that shook him up so much, and not his father's implied death that did. Maybe it was because she showed more sympathy to him?

You did a very good job of using the title throughout the whole story without it seeming cliche. It was a well thought out theme with the story.

Good Job

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

This was the first time I attempted such a dark piece so I am glad you liked it.

Yes Avada Kedavra is truly a dark spell and its darkness is often ignored so I wanted to explore it further. I also implied somewhere in the story that Draco and his father didn't share great relations, Draco was subjected to child abuse by him, while Catherine always helped him, healed him, which is why it was Catherine's death that shook him so much and not his father's. Of course he was upset by his father's death too but Catherine dying really hit him hard.

I am pleased you liked the whole use of the title and it wasn't cliche. I put in a lot of thought into the theme, so thank you!


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