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I loved your first story. This one though is moving a bit slow. You're getting too wrapped up in your OC's and the whole plot about the case. Both those things should only be backgrouond to the main scorpius rose story (at least that's what I expected as a sequal to a story that was just about them). Sorry to be critical, your writting is really very good. Still can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Your not being critical. The last one moved kind of slow as well. It will speed up I promise. The story is going to start to focus much more on just Scorpius and Rose from the next chapter forward you'll see. Thank you so much for the review.

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