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Review:Soraa says:
That was really great, I love the action bits! Even if they did catch the wrong person! hahaa.
Right, firstly, I'm so happy that we got to hear a bit of Matts background. I've been waiting solong to hear why he is so protective and now I know that he sees Rose as the sister he always wanted because she's so accepting of him and she doesn't want him to be perfect like his family do.
Secondly, I'm so glad that someone else thourght about what would happen if a muggle crime was mixed with a wizard one, I've been thinking about that since I first learnt about Autors! Finally, an explaination of the Intelligence among unusual rights. Really great. When I read you section I could help thinking about whether Petunia would havejoined because she was so jealous of Lily when they were children.
Anyway lastly, I know there wasn't much of Scrop and Rose but sometimes you just need to get the plot across, but still just the fact that Rose allowed them to hold hands for a few moments is a huge step and I'm so glad that she is finally letting him touch her. Also I'm glad they're finally joking around with one another again and not taking everything too seriously.

Anyway, great chapter,
Sora

Author's Response: Yeah Matt has an interesting background, he has never been accepted by his own family and I think that is partially why it hurts that Rose kept secrets from him because she is one of the few people who actually knows how much it kills him that his family can't accept him for who he is. (I know that wasn't in the chapter but thats what i think he feels.) Yeah the whole idea of what would happene if muggles got involved kind of came once I dug myself into the ditch of having Harper being a muggle, in chapter 4, since i had already published the chapter I couldn't change it so... I basically beat my head around until I found a way to connect him to Warwick. Worked out well.
As for Scorpius/Rose moments they honestly just didn't fit into the chapter very well, So I had them have more of a friend approach than anything.
Anyways thank you as always for the review i'll be back in a couple of weeks with an update.


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