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Review:marauder5 says:
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Oh my God! This was hilarious! I'm still smiling goofily (kind of like Teddy's smile in this story - that says enough, doesn't it?)

I absolutely LOVED this. You obviously have a talent for writing humour, and fluff, because this is one of the best one-shots I have rad in those genres. Like this right here: "And by that, he meant that it dropped right out of his body and straight into the Kitchens below their feet (this could be rather inconvenient if, say, one had other plans concerning their stomach, such as digesting recently consumed bacon and eggs)." That's just a perfect paragraph! Man, I wish I could write like this!!

It was also funny that it took Teddy so long to figure out that he was in love with her. He reminds me a bit of Ron in that aspect. Victoire was so sweet when she asked him out - she was so shy about it, which seems very realistic.

Overall, this was a fantastic story! I have no criticism for you, because I loved every little bit of it!!! :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Aww! Thank you so much! And I can totally imagine the goofy smile!

*blushes* I can't keep on saying thank you, but I'll say it again. This was my first shot at a completely fluffy and romantic piece, although my novel is pretty fluffy and romantic! That line about Teddy's stomach was one the most fun lines to write, behind the one about chimpanzees and National Geographic!

And Teddy's really just your average run-of-the-mill idiotic guy, who just takes a while to read the signs! And awkward Victoire is adorable and awkward!

Okay, I'm gonna say it just one more time - thank you so much!

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