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Review:Courtney Dark says:
It is such a nice feeling getting back to this chapter - I was away for a couple of days and even during that short amount of time, I found myself thinking back to this story, wondering what was going to happen next.

Anyway, bad Alrek! I must admit, I had a feeling in the pit of my stomach that there was something strange going on with his character - he was always so mysterious, and very suspicious when he agreed to go to Hogsmeade with that big group of Gryffindors. I'm just not sure I actually expected him to be a spy for Voldemort himself! However, I do love the fact that we get to see some things from different Death Eater's points of view (it was very interesting in this chapter) because it seems to give your story a whole other dynamic. And Bellatrix, as always, was fantastic.

I enjoyed Belle's revelation just as much - she is such a strong character, and I think her story really proved that. It also makes a lot of sense that she would be reluctant to start anything serious with Sirius after what happened to her - Christophe seems like a piece of work!

Anyway, I loved that Lily and Alice were so supportive of her - I really like reading their scenes together, as they seem like such good friends. I think they all balance each other our very well with their differences, but also have many similarities, too.

I really enjoyed this chapter!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Courtney! I'm so sorry I've been a little MIA for the past few days. Stupid work and being sick have killed me :(. Well, not literally :P

It makes me so warm and fuzzy that you were thinking about what was going to happen when you weren't able to read. Can I just steal you and keep you at my apartment to tell me nice things when I feel all blahy? Haha

Alrek! Naughty naughty Alrek. I'm so happy you had a bad feeling about him. I didn't want his association to come out of no where, but I also didn't want it to be totally expected. Bellatrix is too much fun to write, haha. She's such a good baddie.

I really enjoy writing the friends scenes. Both the girls and the Marauder's ones. I'm so excited that you finally know Belle's whole back story!!!

Thank you so much for another absolutely awesome review ♥


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