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Review:patronus_charm says:
Meow hey Kayla! I've been many to check out this one-shot for several reasons like it being an Aundrey/Percy, it has ANDREW GARFIELD ON ITS BANNER *casual fangirling*, the banner is awesome and it's an Ed Sheeran song! So all in all, a recipe for an awesomesauce story:D

I don't think I can recover from that, I need a cat. NOW! Wub :'( I obviously knew it was going to be sad given what challenge it was entered for, and the song name gave hints, but I didn't expect that. I think it was when Percy referred to the baby as his son it clicked in my head.

The beginning was so adorable though, with him and Audrey deciding what the baby would look like, and the gentle teasing and blushing. It was too cute to be true. I really love how you made Percy relatable and a nice person as that's what I imagined him to be like so I'm glad it fit my head canon.

Then the way he was thinking of his nephews and how they could play together. Wub. I don't think I can ever recover, as he was so happy and blissful and for that to then happen!

This one-shot was perfect and think this line - 'He couldn’t wait to hear him saying his name, not as Percy but as, “Daddy”.' made it, as it contrasted so much to the ending.

Totally adding to my favourites great work Kayla, and I'm definitely going to check out more when I have time as I've loved what I've read of yours so far :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hey Kiana! :D

ANDREW GARFIELD IS JUST BEAUTIFUL OMG I LOVE HIM ♥

AND ED SHEERAN IS JUST PERFECTION, I CAN'T HANDLE HIS PERFECTION UGH

*hands you a cat* I'm sorry! :p

I'm glad you liked it, it was a pretty personal one-shot for me. :)

When I wrote that line, I was like, "NO. I CAN'T DO THIS TO PERCY. WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME?!"

I just made a sort of whale-like noise and kept writing ahaha. :p

I'm really glad you liked it, you're far too kind! ♥

Thanks for the AMAZING! review! :D


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