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Review:potterfan310 says:
This chapter is just one big bag of fluff, which is so good!! ♥

Aww Chase and Albus (Chase and Louis are so much better though) so awkward, bless them. Although I'm glad that Louis is jealous!!

"Donít they know that that kind of activity as a teenager can lead to pregnancy? Leave it to overly hormonal kids like Molly and Ollie not to think about something like that. I know that girls like Rose and me are far too smart for things like that." - Oh god, the irony, although somethings do tend to have a habit of coming back to bite you on the ass so maybe it's just Karma :)

Oh god, I love James' story. Such a cocky twleve year old boy, randomly asking the first girl he sees to kiss. Sorta reminds me something Sirius would do or even James when he was trying to get a kiss of Lily. Haha oh the irony of Maylim being Cho's daughter, pure brilliance. At least it was as awkward as Harry and Cho's though. I think it's sweet they became friends after wards :D

Rose's middle name, if it was Hermione who suggested it, I bet Ron had a fit or it could work out the other way as well.

"I'm buying a pet elephant, Malfoy." - I might have to pop to a bookshop now, I never knew they sold elephants :D Lol

I think Rose/Scorpius is quite cute. Especially since it's sorta got a Romeo/Juliet theme to it where they hate each other but go for it anyway. ♥

"Hugo, the easily distracted kid he is, falls over and starts rolling around in the sand for no apparent reason." - Hugo is one of a kind isn't he :D This sentence reminds me so much of my one friend since it sounds like something she would do :) Then again I get easily distr- Is that a penguin?

Louis and Chase = perfection ♥ Their kiss is just perfect, I mean sun, sand and the beach it's just so romantic. I have to say their is my favourite by far.
"Smiling, I do what I always do. I chase after her." - This just about sums up Louis and Chase I think. It's so sweet and aww.

Nothing major but I spotted mom again, at the start of James' story and in Louis'.

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :D

Author's Response: Yes, if you couldn't tell, I was in a serious mood for fluff when I wrote this, haha.

Irony is fun x)

Haha I wanted to make James's story kind of sum up his friendship with Maylin, since she's going to be a more prominent character in the story overall.

I thought that, after what happened to Lavender at the battle of Hogwarts, both Ron and Hermione would develop a deep sense of respect for her so I wanted to show that in the best way ^_^

Hugo is kind of based on my cousins... which I suppose is slightly unfortunate, lol.

The basic purpose of all these stories wasn't just to show the character's first kisses, but to represent their relationships with each other. That's why I needed Chase and Louis's to be cute and sweet and fun.

I swear, if it weren't for your cc's I would have a LOT more grammar problems, so for that I thank you and apologize.

So happy you liked it, keep reading and reviewing! x


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