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Review:AlexFan says:
I'm here from the review tag!

I actually read this a couple of days ago but I just never got around to reviewing so the review tag seemed like the perfect opportunity to fix that!

Anyway, the suspense throughout this was killing me! I was just dying to know what the news was but no one was spitting out what it was and I was starting to feel the same things as Dom.

The longer I kept reading the chapter the more suspense there was but NO ONE WAS TALKING so I started thinking that the absolute worst had happened.

And then the Healer showed up and said that Dom couldn't have children because of her body changing and everything and I just felt so bad for her! I know that Dom hadn't even thought of having children yet but I'm sure that hearing you can't have children because of your condition would break just about any woman's heart (unless they really hated children in which case they'd be relieved).

I just feel so horribly bad for Dom and everything that she's going through! I'm so excited to see where this story ends up going and I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Awesome job on this chapter though!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Aha I am glad the suspense had the desired effect. I am not sure if I am good at writing it but I tried my best. Well it is an awful thing to happen so i like to think the suspense was worth it xP

Aw it's a sad moment for Dom yeah, and it's good to know that you felt bad for her. Yes, it can really break a woman's heart because almost every woman has a motherly side to her, and Dom definitely likes children. Well, she'll try to deal with it and let's see what happens.

I am pleased you could connect with the chapter emotionally and that you're looking forward to the next chapter. I'm going to start working on it soon.

Thanks for reading!

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