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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag!

Well, I am glad I got a chance to catch you on tag and catch up with this story. I liked how you unfolded the events slowly in this chapter. The first memory had me surprised and wondering what went wrong then, and when we found out it was so sad. Somehow I CAN believe Rose to be very serious about her career to give up on her love, even though it is an awful thing to do. Yet it was sad how they broke up over it, they could have talked things out and such.

The "Romeo-Juliet" reference (if I can call it that) was spot on too, and I liked how Rose felt that they really weren't the ideal lovers everyone felt they should be.

Anyway, this was a great chapter. We learnt a lot, and in an interesting manner. Your descriptions were really good too and the emotions came through well. I can really sympathise with Rose and yet feel frustrated at her at the same time, which is a good thing, as I am connecting with your MC.

All in all, good job!
I hope I'll be back for the next chapter soon!
9/10
Cheers
AD (AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey there Aditi!

I'm glad that you want to catch up on this story, and I always look forward to what you have to say about my work :D Yes, that memory probably provoked the same feeling in me when writing it, but I figured that it would need to be something shocking to cause that jilt between the two. I'm glad that you could believe it, as that's probably the thing I was most unsure of.

You can call it, and I'm so glad that you liked it! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it and the descriptions were good as I struggle with those. Yay I'm provoking emotion from you, even if it is a negative one :P

Thank you for this great review, and I can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter!

-Kiana


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