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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Aisha Iím here with your fourth review!

Wow that was such a dramatic start. I donít think Iíve ever read a prologue in which the main character dies, but I think it was a perfect way to start, as it shows how her and Alastorís story had a made a full circle with her dying.

I really liked her characterisation though, and it was a brave choice to make her a cynical old lady who was still abusing the world in the way. It added a humorous element to an otherwise sad story and I really liked it.

Then the way she gave that box to her granddaughter was great too, and I can imagine itís going to lead to an interesting story. Sorry this review is short, but as itís only the prologue there isnít that much to comment on, other than itís a really interesting start to the story!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hi! Ooh, only one to go :P

I very much wanted this story to be cyclical, since it's Edith's life story and with life, comes death.

She's a tough cookie. That's her character summed up. She's not afraid of death- if she were, she wouldn't be Edith.

Ah, the ol' inheritance. Edith's legacy and her story has yet to be uncovered to her family, and the fact that it's going to be little Edith who reveals her gran's secrets again adds to the cyclical nature of this story.

Yeah, I didn't give you much to review about, but it was a great review, so thank you so much :D


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