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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Bethany Iím here with your last review, and I have to say itís been such a pleasure reading your stories as theyíve been so unique and enjoyable to read and you really did deserve to win :í)

I have to admit when the letter arrived I did start to get a little excited as I thought it could be a love letter from Theo professing that he loved her since first year and that he wanted to marry her, but the real thing was just as good. I did wonder how the other Slytherins viewed Daphne, because like I said in an earlier review it is odd for a pureblood female to have a job, and I can sense there is some tension between her and her fellow snakes. I think it was right that you didnít reveal the contents of the letter because then the tension and suspense of whatís in make you want to read on.

Daphne and Astoriaís mother was exactly how I imagined her to be. She seemed to be one of those haughty purebloods that you just love to hate. Iím glad that Astoria stuck by her choice for leaving Adrian, and I wonder what that whole thing about him needing her was about as it seemed to be very suspicious.

I feel sorry for poor old Daphne as she clearly loves her job, even her mother is disdainful about it. Then again, if Theo does decide to get his act together and propose it would be a respectable match as heís a pureblood and seems to have a good job. I really hope you explore why Daphne decided to have her own cafť in future chapter as Iím sure thereís an interesting story behind it.

I can see that Daphne does have some deep lying issues. I think it was when Astoria was asking how they did it all, and she seemed to reply more grimly than Eleanor did and it showed that she wasnít entirely happy. Then her thoughts at the end of the chapter with her saying how Theo was the only one who understood and how she was in a tangle of mess. It was all very mysterious.

Another great chapter and I have to say again I really have enjoyed reading and reviewing your stories :)

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hello Kiana! I'm gonna miss your reviews- they really brightened up a few evenings for me! So thankyou for taking the time to leave this one and all the other ones with such detail and everything :)

Haha, for Daphne's sake I wish it could have been a love letter too, but I'm glad that you weren't disappointed! By the end of the story you should find out a lot about Daphne's relationships with her fellow Slytherins, as there's definitely some tension there.

Yeah, I know Daphne's mother is kind of cliche, but there is something fun about those irritating Pureblood witches! I'm kind of re-working the Astoria/Adrian storyline at the moment but I think he will be making an appearance soonish.

Hmm yeah, Mrs Greengrass probably would approve of Theo- that's something I hadn't thought through actually... Definitely going to explain why Daphne started the Pink Hippogriff, as I realise that's something I haven't really got round to addressing... **looks guilty**

I'm glad that the darkness in Daphne's life is coming through, but also that there's a bit a mystery there! It's great to hear!

Thanks again for so many kind, eloquent reviews! I've enjoyed receiving them so much!

-Bethany :)


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