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Review:Bex says:

I've only just started reading your story and it is so addictive! I read it all in a day! And throughout it all my heart keeps breaking and then mending for Addie and Al. They're so perfect for each other.

I like how you managed to weave everybody else's stories and love lives into the story really well. You really add individuality to them so they seem almost like real people.

The quote you put in a while back about having twenty seconds of courage was really inspirational and I refer to it regularly. It's like my motto now.

In your AN you said that there was only one more chapter left. Please tell me I didn't read that correctly. Your story has been really well written up till now and I would hate for the end to be just loosely tied up. I probably wouldn't even mind if you left it at a cliffhanger and wrote a series. But Addie and Al have to end up together! They belong to each other. The same goes for James & Analiese, Alice & Will, Scorpius & Rose, Caleb & Anna, Mary & that other Hufflepuff (I forgot his name as... And even though they're not together I ship them. They're so cute! Excuse my fangirling there.) I can't really say the same for Dom and Lysander or Louis and Paige because you haven't really gone into detail about them. It would be nice if you did though. And Scorpius and Addie's cousin who's gay? I've forgotten his name but maybe he could come back into the picture and you could mention things about his relationship with Lorcan?

I have mixed feelings about Addie's biological parents... I like her "new" sister. She seems cute. I'm glad that her biological parents are in the story though. It gives a fresh type of drama compared to most stories. And I felt so sorry for Matilda when Cormac was talking about his new family and she was crying. My heart broke for her as well.

This is such an amazing story. You're an awesome writer and I'm pretty sure there will be no other Al/OC story that I read that is better than this one. And I'm sorry if you actually read this and had to read my fangirling and rambling. I hope or was helpful for you though.

10/10 definitely.


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