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Review:navyfail says:
Unraveling;
I read this story some time ago but I have a feeling I didn't leave a review;I think my heart literally broke when they didn't end up together but I think that was the point of the story. It was about growing up and friendship and I admire you for writing about it.
The characterization was unbelievably perfect and realistic. Rose being Rose and Scorpius helping her on the way. How they met and how they said their goodbyes were sweet. Probably the best moments of this one-shot. Also there are very few authors who have great last lines like yours: "She smiled one last time for him, picked up her luggage again, and with a small wave, left for her future."
Thank you...for this story.

Sama 10/10

Author's Response: Aiee c: It's a story that I needed to write at the time (two and a half years ago), and I'm so happy that I did. It's a part of my teenage years - the emotions in growing up and the selfish mistakes - that I think I wouldn't remember anymore if I didn't write it down in this oneshot.

Especially at that young age, when we're meeting the most important people in our lives for the first time and feeling those emotions for the first time, it's near impossible to comprehend that there might be many of these kinds of people in our lives in the future who can have such an effect on us. They don't fit in the neat, easy boxes that makes a relationship easier to explain, they might not be healthy, but they happen and so I needed to write about it.

Thank you for reading!


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