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Review:marauder5 says:
I love the theme of light and stars! It's both beautifully and poetically written, and very fitting considering the Black family tradition of naming the children after stars. It really adds a freshness to this story, and I really, really liked it.

I think that your portrayal of Regulus is perfect as well. He's one of those characters that you just want to reach out to and help, because he would really have been a good person, had it not been for his family's influence on him. It's just like you said it in this story: he just wasn't as strong as Sirius was, so he succumbed to them rather than fighting back. The part about him wanting to make Sirius Black was really sad and really beautiful. I wish Sirius could have known what his brother did before he died. If only Regulus had actually sent those letters to Sirius, things could have gone differently.

I absolutely loved this! It was perfect, in my opinion :)

Author's Response: Yes the theme of the stars was inspired by the Black family names so I'm glad that you liked it:D Eek it was poetic? I didn't realise that when writing it, but thank you anyway as I was always terrible at poetry!

I'm so glad that you liked my portrayal of Regulus, I think that's why I wrote this one-shot as I've always felt sorry for him, and he's so tragic and I hoped I conveyed that in this story.

I wish Sirius could have known about what his brother did too, as I think that would have made a big difference to the entire series. I really hope that Regulus did write those letters as I would like to think he tried to make it up it up with his brother, but I guess we'll never know :(

Thank you for this lovely review, it really brightened my day :D

-Kiana


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