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Review:patronus_charm says:
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I don't think I mentioned it in the last review but I really liked the Apres Voldemort it's a really nice touch :)

I have never read anything from a Centaur's perspective before, but after reading this I may give it a chance. It was just so centaurish with him viewing humans as similar yet different, then the frequent references to astronomy. It added something really special and authentic to the story.

I really enjoyed reading all the little details you included about the forest as it added something to the story, and it created excellent imagery. You could just imagine that you were there and walking through the forest as Firenze, and it was just excellent.

I also liked how you showed his meeting with Bane and it was interesting that you included Centaur social dynamics into the story too, as it gave you a sense of how their society worked.

What? Firenze has a dark mark? I never expected that, but at the same time it makes perfect sense. That scene with him and the 'foal' was excellently done and the emotions they were all feeling were really well written.

For a few CC's I know you have large gaps between the paragraphs but sometimes they went a bit larger than the norm so I thought I might just point that out. Other than that it was a really enjoyable chapter :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for coming back to review this story!!

I'm glad you thought the centaur-ness was portrayed well. I loved getting into Firenze's head, and keeping true to character while adding to what it would be like to be a centaur like Firenze was really important to me! :)

It's wonderful to hear you liked the details of the forest, and that the scene was brought to life. Also, I'm happy to hear the social workings of the centaur herd was successful in coming across!

Woops, maybe I didn't write the Dark Mark part clearly enough! I meant that the boy/"foal" had a Dark Mark, and that Firenze was forced to expose it to the other centaurs. My bad! :) I'm glad you enjoyed that scene however, I really hoped to get across the desperation and fear that they would be experiencing.

Thank you so much for this lovely review!!! :)


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