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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here to review your entry for my challenge.

This was certainly very touching and painful. Remus is my favourite marauder so I am glad that you decided to focus this piece on him, and on the anguish he felt on Sirius' death. You expressed his pain and despair quite well, and your descriptions, though simple, were very effective. All the thoughts Remus had about Sirius, of reminiscing the old times, were very realistic and really made me feel sad for Remus. The part about him, Sirius and Harry becoming a family was especially very sad.

The only little CC I have is that perhaps I'd have liked more detailed descriptions of thoughts/events, with perhaps more surreality.

Apart from that, this was pretty good and I liked it. Thank you participating in my challenge, the results will be announced in a few days. Know that whether you win or not, this was definitely a well-written one-shot.

Great job!
Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for reviewing this! This one-shot was definitely one of the ones that I enjoyed writing because exploring what Remus might have thought with Sirius's death is something that I feel people don't think enough of, so it's great to hear that you found it realistic. I'll definitely keep in mind your CC! Thank you so much for your review!(:

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