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Review:nott theodore says:
I absolutely love Luna! She really is one of my favourite characters and so I was really happy to see her make an appearance in this chapter. I thought the way you wrote her speech and her behaviour was quite inkeeping with the person we already know from the books. She never seems to have a plan, so I can definitely imagine her just randomly deciding to go to the quidditch final. As for Rolf, I really enjoyed the way you described him. You've clearly done your research there and I could picture him in my mind quite vividly - he's exactly the sort of person I can imagine Luna ending up with!

The dream at the beginning was really interesting, although I'm hoping it isn't prophetic. I can understand him not telling Ginny and trying not to worry her, because that's the sort of thing that Harry has always done; try and protect the people closest to him.

I think you possibly included too many names in this chapter. It's quite hard to follow characters that we don't already know and the introduction of so many new characters can be quite confusing. There's no harm in not naming or describing every single Auror or Ministry worker that Harry encounters during the day unless they're important to the plot.

nott theodore :)

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