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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hello! I'm here with your review for the exchange.

I liked the beginning of this story. It gave me the same feeling I had when I read the first chapters of DH all those years ago and for a moment I was at the start of the journey yet again, no Horcrux in hand and eager to see what's going on.

I liked how you captured Harry in this story. Being the main character he is very difficult to write, because we have 7 books that are basically guidelines: this is Harry and this is how he is. But you did that great!

I bet the Dursleys were thrilled to have Ron and Hermione over for the summer! Maybe we could see a showdown between Ron and Vernon? That would be fun!

I liked the mysterious note on which you ended this chapter and the grammar and spelling were very good! Good job!

Ral

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)

I hadn't thought about a confrontation between Ron and Vernon, but I will see if it will work in this story or the sequel (which right now is in rough draft timeline form).

I try very hard to keep the characters acting canonically even if the circumstances are different.


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