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Review:MissMdsty says:
Oh Val! I speak a tiny bit of French but when I saw the chapter title I knew immediately what you were referring to! It used to be forbidden in my country as well and all sorts of bad things happened when you wanted to do it anyway. And you managed to paint such a frightening and heartbreaking scene without even mentioning it by name. Brilliant!

I was relieved that the mission turned out well for our characters because I was really tense about it and I don't think I could've taken it if anything happened!

There's a lot of tension right now between the characters and not all of it is related to the war. I love how you are slowly building up to the point where all this romantic chemistry has got to give!

I loved the line: ""You can send me on missions, order me to commit murders or thefts, make me brew whichever potion you like because you cannot do so yourself, but you are incapable of stopping me from thinking as I wish."". It just goes to show once again the power of our thoughts and that whatever we may be forced to do that doesn't change how we feel if we don't want it to!

I do want you to update sooner but I am going to cry when reading the next chapter, I just know it. So I'm a little conflicted!

Good job dear! Amazing chapter!

Ral

Author's Response: Ral &hearts

I was wondering if someone would know immediately what I was referring to, and here you are.

I had doubts about the income of the mission but this just came naturally: I don't think I can write chapters with unfortunate endings quite so soon into the story. (They will most definitely appear though).

Ah, you always pick up on some of my favourite lines! Thoughts are very powerful indeed, it's what led to the context of this story taking place originally, isn't it?

I'm tweaking chapter four, so it should be here soon -- and I hope I don't make you cry too much...

Thanks love!


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