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Review:MissMdsty says:
Oh my God you can write Quidditch! I am blown away by that. Doing the math on the points and describing the game! Is there anything you can't write?

I loved so many things about this chapter! James is so sweet! I really like how you portrayed his efforts to balance out his duties as Head and captain with his relationship. It gives the story a dose of realism since we all balance out these things and even though you can do magic you shouldn't have to be excused from that!

And the ball drops! Thank you! Finally figuring out who the culprit is! I liked how James didn't remember the girl's name. I know it's something small but I've had that happen in University. I've had entire conversations with people who knew me by name and I had no idea who they were!

Lily's so cute when she's jealous! I sometimes have the urge to peel women off my boyfriend. I need a Belle in my life to scare them off. Where can I get one? :)

The pieces are slowly coming together and the Order is getting into the formation we know in canon. I loved the last part being from Minerva's POV. It's sad that she nurtured so many children that went on to become soldiers and gave their lives for the cause. I absolutely loved how Albus sees the issue of giving them a chance, or else they'd be no better than the other side.

And I finally caught up with this story and I'm anxiously waiting for you to update! Brilliant chapter (as usual)!

Ral ♥

Author's Response: Hi my lovely Ral!!

Oh my god that single paragraph about the points took probably as long as the entire chapter. Sports are SO hard for me to wrap my head around. I'm so excited you liked it!!! ♥

Don't you hate when someone comes up to you and totally remembers you and is so friendly like you've seen them a million times, and you just can't remember their name?! It drives me nuts. Poor us. We need better memories. Haha

Yes! They're finally suspecting Alrek!

Everyone needs a Belle in their life, right? ;). She says all the things we want to, haha.

I think I'm actually really excited to write book two with all the Order scenes that will take place. I've enjoyed writing the few in this book quite a bit, and having the Marauders all in on the meetings is going to be so fun!

Aww I'm so happy you liked this chapter and haven't gotten burnt during the last 27 chapters!!! ♥

Thank you so much darling for all your awesome reviews!


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