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Review:alicia and anne says:
Here I am finally with your reviews!
Oh wow I really love the beginning, the way that Rosenelle smiled because her mother told her that is was malicious and how you mentioned that she smiled at her mother in what I can assume was after she died, was so creepy. Already she sounds like such an original and stand out character, I can't wait to see how she develops through the story.
She seems so evil, and I love it, I love the way she talks to James and how she acts, how she thinks. How old is she?
Roseanna was pregnant? or is? I feel bad for her that her parents are acting like that and disowning her, and thinking of their reputation and the campaign instead of their daughter.
Louis is going to be the father? And they hated each other? I can't wait to find out what happened there and what's going to happen with them.
She's a seer? This chapter just gets more and more interesting! I am so eager to find out more!
I'm so glad that she was saved, although the auror doesn't seem too friendly either, but I'm glad that the creepy man has gone.
I must admit it did take me a while to realise that you were talking about three different girls, for a while I though that the person at the beginning was going through all of that, I felt really sorry for her. But I really loved this. I can't wait for more, you've written it wonderfully! :D

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for doing this!

Yay! Im glad you understood it! A lot of people missed the whole 3 girl thing. Guess they didn't read the summary haha :P

Im really glad you liked it though! I wanted to make each girl individuals and not very similar to each other so thanks for pointing that out!

Mya


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