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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh my gosh Rachel! I just dont have words for this but I'll try! The beginning and end were perfect. I loved how you were able to tie them together so seemlessy like that! I loved the little snippet of their life together, suggesting happy times for them but yet also the horrors of the war still plauging on in their minds. This was such a brillient piece! I loved how you tied in her love of the cottage all things about it both the good and its imperfections to also Bill's imprefections and how she still loves him too! I'm not sure that I've ever read a piece quite like this. The style of it just reads so smoothly and just comes across so artistically to me. I don't know what it is about this piece, or your writing for that matter, that is always able to capture me so. I swear you could probably sell me on a book about a banana for all I know and you would be able to pull it off and I would just have to look at it in complete awe! It's never been a huge secret that I absolutely love your writing but it always takes me a bit surprise when I read yet another piece from you and its all just so brillient and beautiful and so well pieced together. I look at your stuff and think well now why hadn't anybody else figured out to do this before you? But I'm not sure if I would like it as much if it wasn't from you. There's a special piece of you that you put into each chapter you write, and it just makes your stories shine with love and gives it just that little bit more to make it even more amazing than it would be. I think this ended up being me gushing more about you and your writing skills than actually about this oneshot but know that i think this oneshot is absolutely amazing and so well done and all I can really do right now is just gush because I'm so in awe of it all!


Author's Response: Erica! Oh, I'm SO happy that you liked this, and I apologize for just how long it took me to properly respond to this review. It always makes my day to see you've come by to review something of mine, and no matter how many days go by before my response, it's no reflection on my level of gratitude, I assure you. :)

I'd been wanting to do a Bill/Fleur one-shot again ever since finishing "Painted Blind" and Sarah made me realize how long it had been since I'd written proper fluff, which was how this story came about. I had a lot of fun doing it! Everyone needs a bit of fluff in their lives, I think. I'd love to write some more in the not-so distant future, although the next (small) thing I've got planned is very dark and angst-ridden. But soon!

I am finding it difficult to respond to this. ♥ In the best way possible, of course! I am just so glad to have you as a friend, and I'm so grateful for the immense support and encouragement you give to me and my stories and my writing, always. I truly, truly am. Thank you for having a look at this!!

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