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Review:imacullenpottergirl says:
Hey Em!!

Okay so my first thoughts were that I really liked how you set out your story!! Having the flashback, makes me intrigued to read your next chapters!!!

I like the plot, and I like how its different to many other muggle/witch stories i've read. Like Jack said, some bits were awkward, but nothing major don't worry :)

Your descriptive language was excellent!!! And your MC has me intrigued. But I do like Aston. He seems like a decent, honest, sweet boy. But yes, there always has to be a complication, aka James. I can't wait to see where this goes!!

A good start to a very promising novella!!
- Abhi

Author's Response: heyy, thankyou.
im so glad that you liked it, great review. thankyou soo much.
Em


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