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Review:800 words of heaven says:
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When I read the summary, I thought this was going to be a super emotional read, but then I start reading this, and I'm like, "This is pretty funny!" and then I get to the end, and I feel like crying. If the idea was to put your reader through an emotional rollercoaster, you succeeded!

This was actually a really lovely read. Derwent was wonderful as the narrator. He seems to have accepted his lot in life, and I like how in the end, he wants to connect with his past, and find his family.

I really love the Dementor lore that you've built up here, too. We don't know that much about Dementors, but your interpretation of them is delightful! I really liked your attention to detail, here.

And honestly, I reckon Derwent will find his family. He does have eternity, after all.

Author's Response: Hola! I'm glad you liked the story, and that it took you on an emotional roller coaster! This story was just one of those goofy, funny ones to write but I definitely wanted there to be some longing and emotion in there as well.

So happy to hear that you liked Derwent- he was such a pleasure to come up with. The Dementor lore was fun too: I love picturing them as having some form of political systems and history.

I think he'll find his family, too! :) Thank you for such a lovely review!!!


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