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Review:Courtney Dark says:
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This was a very nicely written chapter - everything just flowed together so smoothly making for a very easy, enjoyable read!

I love the chemistry between Dom and Teddy - they are such a perfect, adorable couple, and I am so glad Teddy was able to knock some sense into Dom. Clearly she has been through a huge trauma and it is going to take some time for her to come to terms with what she now is, but I think it's definitely important that she remembers that there are still people who love her - and Teddy obviously loves her with all his heart!

I liked the suspense that you were able to include into the middle part of this chapter, before we found out what the big news was - I wasn't quite sure what I was expecting to hear, but I got a big surprise when Dom was told that she couldn't have children. I think her reaction was really well written. After her talk with Teddy, she was clearly trying to hold it together, but struggling.

I am looking forward to the next chapter!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.

I am glad you liked this chapter, as it is one of my favourites so far. It's a pleasure to hear that it flowed well.

Yeah, Teddy and Dom are pretty much perfect, and I am pleased you felt so. Indeed, Teddy is going to help her as much as he can, he's awesome like that =)

I always love suspense though I think I am not very good at writing it, but I am glad you liked it. Yes, I thought it only plausible that being a female if she turns into a wolf every full moon while she's pregnant, the child would definitely be affected, and of course her body. I am glad you think her reaction was well-written, we'll delve more into it in the next chapter.

Thank you!


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