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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I loved this chapter! And I know I say that about every chapter, but this was was especially good, in my opinion. In fact, I'm very tempted to say it was my favourite so far - then again, I'll probably end up saying that about the next chapter, too, so I wouldn't pay too much attention to me.

I really enjoyed reading the about the Order meeting, especially because it was told from McGonagall's point of view. I loved the fact that she was so proud of all her students and also that she feared for their safety. I have to admit, I got shivers up my spine when they started talking about the talents of James, Sirius, Remus and the others, though I'm not quite sure why. Probably just because you wrote it so well! I also like the fact that some of the Order members still have minor doubts about Sirius and that some more minor characters, such as Dorcas and Marlene were introduced. And I love that McGonagall remembers them all as students, and they way they've grown up.

James' section was just perfect. I really liked the line: 'Just a few minutes ago hed wanted nothing more than a bit of quiet and a good sulking. Now he could barely stop from grinning. Funny how someone could do that to you.' I definitely had some very strong Jily feels in this chapter!

I liked the inclusion of Slughorn and his slug club invitations, because I'd been wondering if he would appear in this story. And Alrek is back! I have to admit, I'm quite curious about his character, and am wondering what sort of role, if any, he is going to play in the scheme of things. I am looking forward to hearing about this Hogsmeade visit now!


Author's Response: Hi Miss Courtney!

I was so, so terrified to write this Order meeting. Getting so many adults in a room, two of those being Minerva and Albus AKA hardest people to write for me, then figuring out how to do this conversation without it seeming boring was so scary for me. I can't tell you how excited I am that you thought it was well done! Thank you!

Jily feelings!!! James is sort of cute when he broods, right? Haha

Ahhh you're so close to seeing what role Alrek does play ;). I'm so excited to see what you think when you find out!

Thank you so much for all your amazing reviews, Courtney!

♥ Jami

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