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Review:Siriusly89 says:
Hello there, Siriusly89 with your very, very late requested review. I am so sorry about the wait, and hopefully, should you choose to request again, it won’t take quite as long!

Anyway, I’m here, ready as ever to review!

I like that you showed us this specific scene through James eyes. To be honest, I never really understood how Harry didn’t get what ‘L.E’ stood for in OOTP. Now come on, really?

One thing I really liked was that you made sure to describe James’ fascination with Lily in a way typical to teenage boys. I don’t care what anyone says, no fifteen year old can be in love, yes it can grow into love when they get older, but it’s just not possible. And then sometimes you read these stories where James is professing his undying love for Lily, without even explaining how he came to feel like this about her and it just annoys me. Whereas in this, while it is obvious James likes Lily a lot, it’s because she’s a pretty girl whom he annoys to get her attention, but who he secretly likes. The end.

Poor James’ conscience finally seems to be catching up with him. Lily’s competitive side is also very endearing, because sometimes she’s painted as a bit of a saint-like figure, you know, loved by all, hated by none, whereas in my mind at least, she’s a bit like Hermione. You know, can’t really handle not being the best at something, and if she’s rubbish at something, she writes it off as a waste of time.

James is a secret smarty! I loved their discussion on the Transfiguration question, in a way, it was sort of him showing Lily that he’s not the worst person in the world through a common interest. And it was just one of those ‘awh’ moments.

Gah! Well Lily’s mood has done a 360 turn around, hasn’t it? I know that, theoretically, it is sort of James’ fault, but in all fairness it did show her what type of person Severus really was. I can understand her being mad at James, but her last comment was just harsh.

I am now very intrigued!

Feel free to re-request!

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank so very much for coming by to review my story.
I'm really glad you liked James's point of view and his thoughts towards Lily and I really love that you enjoyed the Transfiguration moment.

I do really hope you wouldn't mind my requesting again! I would really love to hear of your opinion for the next chapters as well :)
Thank you so much once again


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