Hello, Siriusly89 here with your very late review, for which I am very sorry for!
It seems I start every review with that first line these days. . . . .ah well, now is not the time to ponder my shoddy time-keeping abilities!
Awh, Toriís making an effort to look good for her little crush! Naww. . . . .although Iím not sure how sheís going to react when she finds out that heís a Muggleborn, somehow I donít think thatís going to end well.
Astoriaís day sounds hectic! A little like mine, minus the whole magic part, and the preventing someone from hexing a Ravenclaw, but she sounds like a girl who has a million things to do all at one time!
The boys giving her Quidditch tips was pretty cute. I was just sitting there going, awh, you donít think Astoria knows what sheís doing, thatís nice, just wait Ďtill you see her in action. Because, lets face it, we all know Astoriaís going to be brilliant at Quidditch. Seriously. And if sheís not, I shall eat my hat.
GAH! SHE WALKED INTO THE MUGGLEBORN! YAY!
Mysterious muggleborn is Terry Boot! For some reason, I had it in my head that M.M was a Hufflepuff, but now we know heís a Ravenclaw. HANG ON! Phin hexed a Ravenclaw outside D.A.D.A, right? What if that was Terry?
Wait, Terrys not in Astorias class. Never mind. .. . .
Their little banter was very well done. They arenít falling all over each other, but thereís definitely some subtle flirting going on, and I love to read that, you know, the whole poking fun at one another, all the while batting eyelashes. Itís just brilliant.
Wohoo! Astoria is right on track to become seeker! That little piggy Griz just needs to leave her alone.
One snitch, I told you my prediction would come true!
Two snitches, I should so become a seer!
HOLD IT! That stupid Griz hit her in the back of the HEAD? What is wrong with that girl? She needs help, and lots of it! Stupid Griz, stopping Astoria from becoming the seeker, making me wrong. Grr. . . . ..
Feel free to re-request!
Author's Response: Ahh, I love your reviews, they make me laugh :)
I love making Tor snap out of Death Eater child mode for a little and just act like a normal fifteen year old! I'm glad you think Terry and Tor seem to have good chemistry, I'm hoping that their relationship proves to be quirky and funny the way it is in my head instead of all Twilight-esque swooning and all that.
Astoria is really busy, and I'm sure all the identity crises in the upcoming chapters won't help with that at all! :P
Yes, Griz is just mean, isn't she! Well no worries, they get her back... in, like, Chapter 17... but eventually, she gets what's coming for her!!! It's too bad Tor got attacked during the trials, but I guess not everybody gets to be a Quidditch player. Although I'd totally be one if I was at Hogwarts. Definitely.
Thanks for another great and entertaining review! :D I'll definitely re-request. :)