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Review:potterfan310 says:
Louis is a mad one!! I've never seen such a hyper Louis before. It'll be intresting to see how him and Nell work out. I mean did they just randomly happen or are there feelings somehwere deep inside of it all.

I somehow have a feeling that Jake's surname might be Creevey?

Aww poor Coral, I think her backstory is pretty intresting, not too mention her brother Seth sounds like a hunk! ;D

Big brothers: a pain in the bum but at the same time you can't help but love them, not matter how annoying they are. Seth seems really intresting and I like him so far.

Albus, Albus, Albus. Where do I begin, he's such a troubled person, bless. I think deep down he might want a little help but being 1) a boy, 2) a teen and 3) upset/angry all the time he is probably not going to admit it.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :D

Author's Response: Ahh. Yes, everything about the Louis and Nell relationship will be explained :)

Actually, Jake's surname is 'Matthews'. I mentioned it in the first chapter!

Ahaha i love Seth, he's just too awesome :) I'm glad i got their relationship portrayal right! I'm an only child so i was finding it a bit difficult to write out that part.

Ahh Albus. The boy's got some issues. But that's what Coral is there for - to help him out :)

Thanks for reviewing! :D


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