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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh this chapter was honestly just so sad for me! Her thoughts and actions still suggest a deep unsettling emotion deep inside of her and I can imagine that anyone would be still only days after finding out that you are now a werewolf. I felt so bad for her, when her boss asked her to basically use this condition of hers to help with the prophet. It seemed almost careless, or maybe rude is the right word I'm looking for. Dom is still trying to get over the idea that she is a werewolf and then along comes her boss to say that she has great plans on how to best use this to suit the prophet. I can imagine that I would be rather upset if someone did that to me. The ending was great. I loved that Teddy suddenly appeared and that it also makes the reader wonder whats going to happen now. He just suddenly comes but doesn't look happy at all to see his girlfriend. It makes me wonder if the time apart is going to make him think maybe they need a break, or is he going to fight harder to try and keep her? Or is he upset because the bite mark is visible so it really makes him hurt for her? I'm not sure but I'm interested to keep reading and finding out these answers. Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.

Yeah, it was quite sad, wasn't it? I am pleased that you could understand the emotions beneath her thoughts and actions. Her boss is quite rude, or I should say unsympathetic. We'll definitely see more of her in further chapters. I am glad you liked the ending too. Well, Teddy is certainly not the kind of person to give up on Dom, and he's one who won't care about the bite mark. He is a very calm, sensible, gentle personality. You'll see why he was unsmiling though =)

Thank you!


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