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Review:WeasleyTwins says:
Hello Jami! It's about time I got back into the groove of reading and reviewing BTF!

I don't even know what to say to you anymore, I really don't. I'm getting so involved with the characters, I can't even think of anything mildly intelligent to say! All I want to do is flail around like the fangirl that I really am. Since I first discovered HPFF, I've read tons and tons of James/Lily and Marauder era stories. Tons. But I can honestly tell you that this is one of the best ones, if not the best, that I've ever read. I'm so in love with this story and the characters right now. SO MANY FEELS.

"I am partial to the wet dog look" - I was dying. I've only got two days left of student teaching and I'm finished with the actual teaching, so I'm sitting in the back of the room - Anyway, I have to tell you that I almost interrupted the teacher doing a lesson because I was desperately trying not to laugh. One of the best humorous lines in fanfiction. I love it!

I do have one small suggestion (and it's super nitpicky, so don't beat me up :P). "With a gentle whoosh of it, something intoxicating reached her nose." - The "of it" part of the sentence threw me off quite a bit. For me personally, I'd take those two words out to make the sentence flow better. That's really the only thing I saw, Jami, and it's not even a big deal, really :)

"The first time they kissed, they would be each others. Not just friends." - I ADORE THIS. I don't know why, can't explain it, but I ADORE THIS. It's just about the sweetest things I've ever read. It's not overly sappy, but just right. If I'm right, James is thinking this particular part and that just makes me melt. I'm going completely fangirl here and say that is so dreamy. Honest to goodness, DREAMY. If I were Lily and I somehow read his mind on this part, I'd jump him. No joke. Literally on the more perfect lines of the story so far.

I'm so glad that I'm able to pick this up again. It didn't occur to me until now that I've seriously missed this story and its plot and characters. I'm not sure this review made any sense or said anything decent, but just know that I think its wonderful!


Author's Response: SHELBY! This was such an awesome surprise!!!

I really want to just ignore your entire paragraph because I have no idea how to respond. But instead, I'm just going to say THANK YOU and flail around like an overly excited fish. You really, really made me smile ♥

Hahaha I can't say I'm upset that you almost interrupted the class :P But I'm happy you managed to pull if off ;)

That's an awesome suggestion! I'll head in as soon as I finish responding and edit it. Thank you so much for pointing it out ♥

That thought of James's made me want to take him from Lily. I'm so happy you think James is dreamy too. He can get such a bad rep in FF, that showing that he can be both dreamy and not a playboy at the same time makes me happy.

Aww I'm so happy you missed the characters! I wish I could say thank you in a better way, but I have no idea how so I'm just going to have to tell you how amazing you are.

I hope you like the next chapter! I think you'll really enjoy an idea I played around with about how the boys transformed into their animal forms. Hehe.

Thank you!!! ♥

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