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Review:dreamer21 says:
okay, so wow. quite a mess we have. i like this story. though boys crying really annoys me. the sudden outburst of charlotte's was surely not expected. i love leo and scorp. my favvv. and charlotte saying she that she loves the other bloke? woah, talk about being messedup, i like lily and herr response, ellie i find annoying. she needs to decide. that make up incident with james was hilarious, i just laughed at it. it was suppose to be sexy but i just went like no. haha. i got a good laugh. you have an amazing talent with fluff. never stop writing. seriously. you give girls hope withyour perfect loving characters. lol
also, i liked how james got dumped but how he acted afterwards was just crazy. its just a girl, yo.
albus is my favv maybe because my first novel is on him but he is just amazing. no matter how he's presented. im waiting for the happy ending now. oh, and i hate leo and ellie's parents, very annoying. reminded me of the malfoys. had tgat aura to it.
my5 capitalization and puntuaction sucks at the moment because im reviewing through my tab. so bear with me.
okay, i think i should stop now.

Author's Response: Em!

It's a mess, but it will soon be a resolved mess. Ha, I love how you've comprised quite a few different chapters into this review. It's very awesome!

Your flattering words! Gah, thanks.

So, I'll address your inquiries about James' reaction. I hoped I showed this properly, but it wasn't just that one girl, he's been rejected with everything he's done. The poor bloke really is unhappy, but I hope to change that soon :D

Ha, I know why Albus is your fav ;) I tend to enjoy characters that I write about too. Stories about James II? I generally like them.

Oh, you're a ScoRose supporter? Awesome! I have quite a few of those :D

Wow, what an amazing review. Thanks!

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