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Review:Courtney Dark says:
This was a great chapter - mainly because I absolutely love it every time you write a flashback into young Lily's life. I love seeing her relationship with Petunia develop. Though they are still reasonably friendly at this point in time in the flashback, you can definitely see that their relationship is heading downhill. And Lily's mother is so lovely! I love the bond between the little family.

Haha, Moody is the Auror teaching Sirius' lessons. Somehow, I hadn't been expecting that, but it definitely makes a lot of sense. Your characterization of him was brilliant and I especially liked how you ended with the line "constant vigilance" because that is just so Moody!

I like how this tension is slowly starting to build up between the different groups of the school, especially with the Slytherins. The fact that one of the Slytherin prefects didn't even turn up for the meeting was a nice touch and also the fact that Rosier spoke out of turn - and Moody's reaction was absolutely perfect!

I like that Frank seems to be getting a little more action, and that Alice showed her Gryffindor-ness when she got angry at Rosier. I am definitely beginning to see how those two will make great Aurors!


Author's Response: Hi Lovely!!! You're my very favorite person ever right now.

I love writing those flashbacks. We'll start to see more and more of why tore those two apart, but writing them before that when they were just sisters was a lot of fun. I think Petunia never really got over the fact that she was so cruel to her sister and never had a chance to make up, then blamed magic for being the reason she was dead in the first place.

I couldn't let Moody go without making a few entrances in this! Haha! I think he'd be a very funny RL person to know. And very scary...

You are one of THE ONLY person who has commented on Abigail not showing up for the meeting! THANK YOU! I'm so happy somebody picked up on that!

Thank you so much for another amazing review ♥

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