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Review:bester_jester says:
So good so far. Shame you haven't got more reviews.

I'd like to hear more from Erin about her kidnapping. Something so serious would surely impact her more.

All of your characterization is great! Sirius and Remus are really likeable. Haven't heard anything about Peter?

Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: I know, I wish more people would take the time :(

Erin's kidnapping will come out more much later in the story. I think she's trying to block it out of her mind so she can try to have a normal life at the moment, and isn't able to tackle it properly yet.

Thank you! I'm glad you like them. As for Peter, I find it hard to write about him because obviously he turns out to be evil XD he will be dropping in now and then. I think mainly he's going to be a plot device more than anything though. I would've cut him out completely like so many people do actually, except it never feels right to ignore the fourth Marauder when he's so important canonically. Hmm, I don't know, but I agree I'm not doing him justice :(

Thank you though, more soon :) x

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