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Review:AlexFan says:
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Okay, I'll keep this short and sweet! You had great grammar, great flow and I love the fact that you keep bringing more and more depth to Tori.

At first she was just this really annoying character that I hated and wished would just drop off of the planet. I still hate her and I still find her annoying and stuck up but now I'm starting to feel sorry for her bit by bit.

The part where she was crying to Albus about how she screwed up everyone's lives was probably the part where I started to feel a little bit sorry for what she'd probably gone through in her life.

Anyway, as nice as Albus sounds, I'm not that fond of him (I don't know why! He sounds so lovely that I should like him but I can't bring myself to like him! It's frustrating!) I'm still fond of James though and I especially like him. I just feel so bad for him though, the girl he that he thought liked him didn't like at all.

It must be harsh to know that your girlfriend preferred your brother to you.

Anyway, I thought you did an awesomesauce job on the chapter!

Author's Response: Hey there!

Short and sweet is always good:) I totally understand what you mean about Tori. At first she really was a first-class bad word - and she still is, but like you said, we're beginning to see a little bit of depth to her.

Albus is definitely a nice guy, but he is also incredibly naive, especially around Tori. I don't think he's ever been around a girl like that before!

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter - thank you so much for the review.


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