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Review:patronus_charm says:
I finally found some time to come and visit Undertow!

I am so glad that Over the Edge has a sequel, with the way you ended it, it would always leave me thinking but what happened to Rose and Krum did they managed to get a happy ever after or did they end up breaking up. But yay I get it here :D

I love the way you started it was perfect, as you were showing that though Rose is happy, there seems to be that underlying feeling of whether this is the way she really wants to live her life constantly on the run. Iím also really glad that the memories of Regina are still haunting her, as it would make perfect sense that they were especially with the way Krum got arrested and then he escaped from prison. I canít wait to see how this continues to affect her.

I suppose the one good thing about being on the run is that they get to visit a tropical island. Iím so excited to see all the exotic locations and I canít wait to see where else they visit. Eek! Iím just so excited in general, as Iíll be reading live time and not all in one go!

This was an excellent prologue and I can definitely see how it could be a standalone book! I am now eagerly waiting chapter two :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Yay!! I'm so excited you liked OtE enough to want to check out the sequel!

I'm so glad that the feeling that Rose is happy but... came through. That's going to be the major theme of the story, deciding between two things that are both good but neither perfect. And I thought it was important to show that what happened with Regina has changed Rose. I don't think that sort of thing is something you just get over. I'm glad you liked it being mentioned here.

Writing a whole new setting has been fun but challenging. Rose will find her way back to London eventually, but for now, I've had the chance to spend a lot of time looking at beautiful photos of places I've never been :P

Thank you so much for reviewing. I've been having some writer's block of late, but I really hope to update this by the end of the weekend. Thanks again!!


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