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Review:nott theodore says:
Okay, so I know I said I was going to let you torture me in whatever way you pleased with this story, but...but I don't want Gwen to fall in love with Joshua! It has to be James!

It was great to see Freddy back, because I really love his character. He's a lot of fun, but I also love the way that Gwen clearly knows both him and James so well, and there's no way that they can keep secrets from her. Sneaky James, trying to use Freddy to find out what Gwen thinks of Joshua!

And Gwen got the chance to fly again! I'm just as impatient as she is to see her playing quidditch again, I think! James' way of letting her fly again was really quite sweet, and even though he hasn't (hopefully in the past) treated women very well, he's lovely to Gwen most of the time and I can understand why she's in love with him.

And I think that James is finally starting to tell Gwen how he really feels in this chapter! First trying to find out if she's in love with Joshua, and then saying that he's only ever said 'I love you' to Gwen, and then making the 'joke' that he's going to steal her and they can get married and have kids... Gwen has convinced herself that there's no way he can feel the same and I think it's going to take him stating it explicitly for her to see it. But if she has managed to hide her feelings from James, why couldn't he have been able to hide his from her (although I think he probably only realised them in the last couple of months)? I really want them to get together!

Each chapter you update manages to impress me and I'm very grateful for the quick update! I hope the next chapter is coming soon!

nott theodore :)

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