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Review:marauder5 says:
Once again, I have nothing but praise for you :) I really enjoyed this chapter. Tor and Terry were so sweet together in the beginning of it. I loved their ideas of halloween costumes, and I can't wait to see what Terry will get her for her birthday... ;) As for Michael Corner almost catching them together, it was intriguing - I didn't think they would be able to get out of it. However, I hope that Terry's friends will be the ones to catch them, if anyone. I can't imagine how bad it would be if someone like Theo or Daphne would find out...

The part with Malfoy was great as well. It's nice to see some interaction between him and Tor. After all, they will end up together somehow... although I have no idea how! You definitely stayed true to his character, and Pansy's interruption seemed like something she would try to do.

As for the prank, I loved it! Poor Griz - it must have been quite a scary experience for her, even though I sort of think that she deserves it. I still felt bad for her, though. But after all, these are Slytherins we're talking about. Of course they will want revenge.

I was a bit surprised to see Snape take points away from his students. After all, he usually goes out of his way to make sure to only grant the Slytherins points, at to only take them away from the other houses (preferably Gryffindor). But I guess he was really upset this time.

All in all, this was really good! I look forward to the next one already :)

Author's Response: Yay, another wonderful review from you!! :)

I'm so glad you liked this chapter, and yes, they are very cute together! I definitely agree that Michael finding out would be better than one of the Slytherins, yikes. Although they can't continue in blissful secrecy forever... :P

I'm so glad you thought Malfoy stayed true to character! Though he and Tor don't particularly get along, they do actually have a lot in common and around the end of his sixth year is when he starts to get a bit more bearable I think. Pansy is just hilarious to write, it's not really balanced to her but in my head she just seems so ridiculous.

I actually loved writing the prank, it was so fun to come up with!! But yes, poor Griz!! I think Snape felt pressured to be fair, since it was a pretty massive and cruel prank, and he was probably pressured by the other teachers to dole out justice accordingly :P I think it would have been much worse if they had been in Mcgonagall's house!!

I'm glad you liked this chapter as it was a bit fluffier than some of the other ones. The next chapter, which is in the queue, is pretty much pure fluff as well, but I think Tor and the rest deserve a little fun before the mess that Christmas and the new year will be! (spoiler alert? ah well). Thank you so much for this great review!!! :D

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