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Review:adluvshp says:
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Wow, I have come back to this story after a very long time. I read the first three chapters ages ago. Anyhow, I am glad I got the chance to read on.

This story seems to be going in a very nice direction. I like how we learn a little more about Bree and her mother here, and some more 'depth' was added into her character as it was shown how much she loved and missed her mother.

I also enjoyed the moment between George and Bree. It was so sweet when George immediately ran after her when she went to the owlery, and the sort of awkward way in which he tried to console her was cute. I really liked how Fred & George, and Bree seem to have come closer in this chapter, especially towards the end when Bree finally tells them everything about her mother's death. The part about the patronus was a nice touch too =)

All in all, this was a very nicely written chapter and I liked it. Your plot seems good and I hope I get the opportunity to come back and read further on.

Good job!
9/10
Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi! Nice to have a review from you :)

I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for all of your kind words! Thanks again :)


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