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Review:iamyourlucifer says:
I would like to say that I absolutely love the story you're writing. The story feels complex and simple at the same time. The incorporation of the book and how it connects to Draco. I think that is an amazing idea.

How Hermione reacted to the Dark Mark had me crying. But it gave me hope when she finally heard Draco say that he loves her.

This chapter made me think of one song from a Korean boy group, if you're willing to listen to it, ( look up "SHINee Don't Leave" on yt, since I can't link you to it, it should be the first video on the account of LOEN ENT ). There are English CC with it ^^ Maybe it can help later on?

I would give you not 10 out of 10 but 100 out of 10. And the title for the chapter suits ; - ;

Author's Response: Wow, well, thank you so much for your wonderful review.

It is interesting that you mention that it is complex, but simple because that is what I set out to do originally. I wanted to create a story that was easy to follow, but with a little bit of story twist with a magic book that would make it more than simple, but not complicated. So thank you very much for that! It reminds me of my original goal and it must be working. :) And thanks for mentioning the book. I think there are several fics out there about books, but I wanted to make mine an important magical element in the story. So thank you. The author of that book is a known wizard in JKRs series, but it is much to early to spoil things. :)

Yes, Hermione's reaction to the Mark. Yes, it was heartbreaking as Draco knew it would be. ;( But hearing someone say they love you changes things. It just does. So, there may be some hope yet.

I looked up that song and I am SO IMPRESSED with SHINee! Wow! Amazing! They sung it beautifully and reminded me of Boys II Men or NSync. So beautiful. And the lyrics! Oh, my stars, they fit perfectly! *Gasp!* "Those times when we hated one another, I miss everything." If that is not D/H in this story, I don't know what is! "I can't let go of the words, 'I love you.'" Gah! I wrote every lyric out on paper and will indeed revisit it. As you already know, this is much of what Draco feels. It's amazing, really. Thank you so much for suggesting it. It truly is beautiful. You cannot write a song like that without having experienced those emotions... and did I say how beautiful they performed it? I listen to many emotional songs while writing. It puts me in the state of mind that I need to write. This is exactly the type of songs that inspires my writing. THANK YOU!

And dear, you are generous with your 100! Thank you from my heart. And yes, the title of this chapter just couldn't be anything else. ;(

My heart thanks you for your review. Thank you so much for telling me your thoughts. They help me so much.

Dark Whisper

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