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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I loved loved loved the scene in Dumbledore's office, even though we heard some very bad news. I love you incorporate these little bits and pieces we know about the marauders era into your story yet still make them your own and completely original. And I thought you wrote Dumbledore extremely well, too. I've never written him myself, but I'm guessing he'd be quite a hard character to get right.

The talking patronus! That was a really cool scene and McGonagall's reaction was brilliant. I'm guessing James was thinking about Lily when he cast the patronus? Though what moment he chose exactly, I'm not sure.

Gah, you write Bellatrix so brilliantly! I feel like I've said that quite a few times, but I'll say it again anyway. These chapters just keep getting better and better. I'm not quite sure how it's possible, but it is.

Amazing work!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi darling! Dumbledore is definitely a challenge to write, so I'm really happy you think he turned out well! He's one of those characters that you just have to write the same thing a million different ways to see which one sounds most
Dumbly haha.

Yes! He was thinking about Lily! The exact memory will come out eventually ;).

I'm so happy you think they're improving! I've definitely tried to improve over the course of writing this, so knowing that shows is really such a huge compliment.

Thank you so much for your awesome reviews, Courtney! ♥

Jami


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