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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I absolutely loved this chapter - it had so many moments of perfection! (And there I go again, using 'I loved' for the billionth time. Maybe I need to expand my vocabulary...)

You write Bellatrix amazingly well. It's kind of creepy to see how devoted she was to her master, even in the earlier stages of being a Death Eater. And I liked how your write Lucius too, with that faint tinge of nervousness which is often evident in the Harry Potter books, especially in the last one.

I adore (it just doesn't work the same as love) how you so seamlessly switch points of view throughout this chapter and all the chapters, giving us insight into the minds of many different characters. It's unique and individual and makes this marauders story one of a kind. In fact, this is probably the best marauders story I've ever read, especially in terms of characterization.

Aw, I just love Belle and Sirius. That scene between them was absolutely perfect and it was certainly interesting to get a glimpse, even though it was a minuscule one, into Belle's life and start finding out the reasons for her transferring to Hogwarts. I definitely think she is a great character. I like that she has this air of mystery surrounding her. She and Sirius would make the perfect couple!

The way you wrote the transformation was brilliant! James' thoughts and feelings as a stag were fun to read, and I enjoyed the process they had to go through to get into the shrieking shack. And the last line really tied the chapter together so well.

I don't know how you do it, but you just keep getting better and better!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: No! No need to expand your vocabulary :P! Really though, I feel like I must sound like a broken record answering your responses. I just don't know any better ways to tell you how much I appreciate you taking the time to review and how ecstatic I am that you're enjoying it ♥

Showing everything that's going on with the characters and their world is something that's really important to me. I remember wishing in the HP books we would get to see things through someone else's eyes, and though it doesn't make for as short of a story as it would be if it were just Lily, the fact that you think it's unique makes me so happy ♥ And wow... what am I supposed to say to that?! I love the Marauders so much, that your compliment just makes me want to turn to mush. When I melt, you better come find me and put me back together! haha!

I'm so happy you're still liking Belle! I think it's chapter 13 that tells her full story... whichever one is titled 'Revelations.' And I'm really excited to hear your opinion on that :D!!

The transformation was something I was looking forward to do for a while. I feel like their transformation was skimmed over so often, and I wanted to give a feeling behind it so I can't tell you how happy I am that you liked it ♥

Okay, I don't even know what to say anymore except for THANK YOU. ♥


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