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Review:Siriusly89 says:
Hi there, Siriusly89 here with your requested review, which is insanely overdue and I sincerely apologise about this!

Iím going to guess that the first person we come into contact with is a Muggle, due to their wish to become a doctor, not a healer. Yay! I love wizard/muggle ships, because its so fun seeing the wizard/witch try to explain. . . .ah. . .

Iím suspecting the girl ordering her Ďusualí is Lily, am I right? Iím right, I know Iím right!

Heís Irish! Instant connection. I love him already! And heís a Motherís boy, and for some reason I just find that really adorable. So I hope his mother makes a cameo at some point in time!

Wait, the waitress is Lily, never mind. . . .

I would recommend getting this beta read though, as there were a few grammatical errors, but other than that, it was a very nice introduction, and you have me wanting to know more!

Feel free to re-request, I promise it wonít take as long next time!

Author's Response: Hey,
Thank you so much for this review.
I'm thinking of asking for a beta, it would be a good think... I'll make a topic for it some day in the future :)

The idea of a muggle trying to find his way into the magical world always amused me, especially when they are grown up and don't believe things that easy any more. And there is the fact that he will have to learn to live with it over time... but first he has to find out and I'm not planning on letting that happen very soon.

I had a plan with this girl had ordered her usual, but I totally forgot about her. I have to give her a comeback, I think...

I'l definitely re-request, I liked your review.
Thanks again and till the next one :)
Maya


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