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Review:Jchrissy says:
Yay!!! First of all, the appearance of Sirius and sort of Belle made me happy. Hehe. Thank you for the very sweet mention and dedication ♥

This chapter was so much different than I expected. I'm really happy they half talked things out as opposed to sort of going weird about what happened. It's obvious that neither of them regret it, and seems like Scorpius is actually more sure of his feelings than Rose thinks. He knows he cares about her and that she's almost like a safe place for him, but doesn't have to question that.

Poor Rose the analyzer. You can't blame her, though. She just spent the night with a man she cares about, now in the light of day you never know what's going to happen. I think Scorpius did really well actually trying to explain to her that he did care, even using his annoying riddles, haha.

I loved the added bits of humor with the mentions of Ron and Scorpius's first answer to Rose when she asked what happened. Leave it to a man so to be a sarcastic brat when we're just trying to get answers :P

You did a really lovely job creating the 'what could be' sort of feeling. Picturing them waking up together, sharing a lazy breakfast before both heading their separate ways for the day and end up back home with a warm dinner sharing their days with one another. A really sweet mental image, and I loved that Scorpius was sort of thinking along those lines with his thoughts about a flat in Diagon Alley.

Awesome chapter, miss Ral!!! ♥

Author's Response: My lovely Jami! ♥ Your reviews make me so happy you have no idea!

I'm so happy that you liked the mention of Belle. Like I told you when asking for permission to borrow her, she is part of my head canon now and I wouldn't want it any other way!

I guess it's just something girls do, over analyze things that for men are simple. Needless to say I have no idea how men think and I asked my boyfriend some very odd questions along the lines of "how did you know you liked me?" when researching this chapter! I'm almost sure he thinks I'm mental by this point!

And yes, men love sarcastic answers.

I'm so happy you liked this chapter, it was special for me to write and knowing you liked it just makes me happy! Thank you!

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