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Review:Jchrissy says:
Oh gosh this chapter was such a roller coaster!

Okay, let me rewind to the beginning. Those badges are terrible and I want to rip them all off. These people are so easily manipulated. It's like, they all feel too bad if they aren't helping because Tori had them so wrapped around her finger. I'm sure they do want her to be found, but they don't understand that they're missing out on the chance to get to know a really great girl (Charlie!)

Btw, my sister's name is Charli (no E) so if I ever misspell it, that's why :P

But I wish the school would realize that wearing those badges isn't going to do anything except make a very sweet girl feel bad. At least she has her little group of friends.

The twins were particularly annoying in this chapter, haha. At least they're just sort of air heads and not cruel like Rebecca. That stunt she pulled.. god. I thought at first that might be it, then when you made sure to not have Aine seeing her before they got down to the ball I was pretty positive that's why.

I was so angry at James first for his anger when he had to have known it wasn't Charlie's fault, but then really pleased with him for coming to that conclusion on his own. I guess I have to give him some credit for that and for being so willing to apologize.

Ohhh and now you've made me so much happier with this ending! I love the irony of it. Rebecca gave her the dress to embarrass her and make James angry, or something close to angry, and all it did was bring them closer together. Now that's some good karma!!

I think this is moving along at a really awesome pace. It keeps me really entertained without feeling over exhausting, if that makes sense.

Lovely chapter ♥ as always!

Author's Response: Haha, I do hope that is a good thing!

It really does seem that even though Tori is not around anymore, she still has everyone manipulated and wrapped around her finger, doesn't it? I guess she got her wish - she has definitely been remembered by the majority of the school.

As annoying as the twins are, they are always fun to write. I have to admit, I have a twin sister, as she can be extremely similar to Lavender at times. But no, I don't think they're really cruel at all. And if they are, they certainly don't mean to be.

I think James is always going to be a slightly angry person, especially after his relationship with Tori. But I do think Charlie brings out the best of James, which is why they are so great together!

Thanks for another review!

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