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Review:LilyEPotter says:
You did great in capturing how the eldest, or the person in charge, has to be continuously changing their plans to keep younger children interested and occupied.

There's only one part that I find difficult. If the group crash-landed in the lake, why would Victoire climb out and put her shoes on, forgetting about the toddlers until Teddy had surfaced with two of them?

I also liked at the end, Victoire gaining tolerance of the younger children whining as an activity might exceed their abilities.

Author's Response: Hi there!

I completely empathaise with Victoire being the oldest, and having the most responsible job. I wanted to across how boring it was for her, as it was for them, to adapt her plans.

Yeah, valid point! I'll go back and edit it, thank you for noticing :)

Awh, I'm really pleased you liked the end. I just wanted Victoire to just understand why they were whining a bit, and also to just be grateful for them.

Thank you so much for such a lovely review! It's awesome of you! :D

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