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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Erica!

I really enjoyed this chapter, I think it was that cameo from Dumbledore which really pulled it off. Your characterisation of him was great, and that little offer of sherbet lemons just made him, him really.

I really liked how Hermione's still pretending that her and Draco are just friends. Pff I know better, she really does like him deep down and she should really stop denying it!

I'm guessing this probably going to go quite canon, so I wonder what's going to happen when the death eaters come in and raid Hogwarts. I'm guessing Hermione's not going to approve, she's Hermione.

Another great chapter and I can't wait for the next!


Author's Response: Gah you have no idea how much that means to me that you think I did a good job with Dumbledore. Honestly writing his character freaks me out a bit since he's so different. Yes Hermione should just stop denying it but you know how it is with those strong willed ones, its going to take quite awhile for either of them to admit anything! Yes this is still going to go close to canon so the death eaters will be making an appearance here soon! I do hope that you continue reading! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!


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